Re: Please, Any Serious Type Oners Critique my Deck

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: : Land: 19 : : Library of Alexandria : : City of Brass (4) : : Tundra (4) : : Plateau (4) : : Volcanic Island (4) : : Strip Mine : : Maze of Ith : : Spells:26 : : Time Walk : : Time Twister : : Ancestral Recall : : Recall : : Regrowth : : Demonic Tutor : : Amnesia : : Mana Drain (4) : : Mystical Tutor (2) : : Wheel of Fortune : : Fork : : Swords to Plowshare (4) : : Disenchant (3) : : Moat (2) : : Balance : : Braingeyser : : Artifacts and Creatures:16 : : Frenetic Effreet (4) : : Jayemdae Tome (2) : : Mox Pearl : : Mox Saphire : : Mox Emerald : : Mox Jet : : Mox Ruby : : Sol Ring : : Black Lotus : : Zuran Orb : : Ivory Tower : : Tormods Crypt : : Total Cards 61 : : Of Course it is of the Weissman School of Magic, but sometimes i will Mana Drain a fireball or disentigrate, and have nothing to spend the mana on. Should i add a Krevaks tourch?, Mishras factories?, Disrupting Sceptors? Most of my loses come against discard decks, but worst is green/red/blue counter burn decks. : : any serious critique would be helpful, because of a lack of Type I players in Indianapolis (and in general) : : thank you, : : X BARD X : : King of Bards : if you aren't worried about geddon, try out a mana severance. severance, remove al the land, start timetwistering away- the goodies don't stop : if you lose to mana draining your self, play 4 tutors. damnit, find the fireballs when you need em : i would try another moat, 1 aura of silence in place of a disenchant, no fork and no wheel (fork is RR, not a good thing, and wheel doesn't help your strategy) : maze is worthless. try some wastelands of your own : and yes, you want a mirror !!! : SB sugestions: : dwarven miner : mox monkey : tithe (LD) : aura of silence (prison decks, void decks, etc) : energy storm (this card is the best card that noone plays with. kills flying beatdown, destroys burn decks for a turn or 2- all you need normally) : and pyroblast/hyrdoblast : maybe also move the crypt to SB from main deck- to make your deck sixty cards) : as for the frenetics, they're good and all, but i wonder about them as kill cards. maybe only 3 ? or you could try ophidians, the best creature none plays in type1 : other minor gripes : i would suggest relearn instead of recall- mainly because recall requires a discard, but most importantly, it removes itself from the game- yek : i also like 1-3 force of will- 1st turn voids suck ! : : some other ponderings