Mono-Black suicide deck needs Critique

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: Key Word: Life Advantage The Idea is this... Drop the Forsaken Wastes when You have more : life then your opponent. You can gain more life by casting either first turn Ivory Tower, Black Vise or : Ebony Charm. The Charm mostly is used for it's first listed ability. (Target Opponent loses 1 Life and : you gain one.) But if you don't get life advantage early on, Drain Life, and the Orders, and Hippies are : also at your disposal. When you get the life advantage and the wastes are in effect, try to use the Rats : and pestilence to increase the damage. You might take lots of damage, but if you had a decent life : advantage before, you might pull out of the game alive. You also must use the "One-Sided" Damage as : well. You can still cast Drain Life during a Wastes. You won't gain any life, but your opponent still : takes the damage. Festering Evil and Urborg Stalker are meant to increase the damage done every : turn, and if you don't draw a wastes or the tutor you can use the "Evil of Uncle Fester" as a mediocre : substitute. The Hymns to our old pal Tourach is just some discard, and Ishan is just a beatdown : creature. : This is an experimental Deck I was working on, and basically, I have this deck in Library of Dominia : and I thought that I would like to get a critique on this "Thing" because I wanna use it in a t1 tournament : soon. So I just copied my Library of Dominia file, and put it here. I know it is a rather suicidal deck. : What do you think : Land : 1x Bottomless Vault (I traded my Lake of the Deads, so this is all I got. Do you think I would actually play more then one of these?) : 18x Swamp : Artifacts : 1x Black Vise : 1x Ivory Tower : 1x Sol Ring : 1x Zuran Orb (I know it's not restricted anymore.) : Black : 4x Crypt Rats : 4x Dark Ritual : 1x Demonic Tutor : 4x Drain Life : 4x Ebony Charm : 2x Festering Evil : 2x Forsaken Wastes : 4x Hymn to Tourach : 4x Hypnotic Specter : 1x Ihsan's Shade : 4x Order of the Ebon Hand : 2x Pestilence : 1x Urborg Stalker : Any Comments would be humbly appreciated : I would also like to put a sideboard up, but I'm not well : schooled in t1 sideboards. All I know to put into the Sideboard is : 2 Nev's Disks.